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Learning Objectives
Students will learn to outline an informative speech.
- Demonstrate an understanding of outlining.
- Create a proper outline for an informative speech.
Outlining Your Speech
Most speakers and audience members would agree that an organized speech is both easier to present as well as more persuasive. Public speaking teachers especially believe in the power of organizing your speech, which is why they encourage (and often require) that you create an outline for your speech. Outlines, or textual arrangements of all the various elements of a speech, are a very common way of organizing a speech before it is delivered. Most extemporaneous speakers keep their outlines with them during the speech as a way to ensure that they do not leave out any important elements and to keep them on track. Writing an outline is also important to the speechwriting process since doing so forces the speakers to think about the main points and sub-points, the examples they wish to include, and the ways in which these elements correspond to one another. In short, the outline functions both as an organization tool and as a reference for delivering a speech.
Preparation Outline
There are two types of outlines. The first outline you will write is called the preparation outline. Also called a working, practice, or rough outline, the preparation outline is used to work through the various components of your speech in an inventive format. Stephen E. Lucas[1] put it simply: “The preparation outline is just what its name implies—an outline that helps you prepare the speech” (p. 248). When writing the preparation outline, you should focus on finalizing the purpose and thesis statements, logically ordering your main points, deciding where supporting material should be included and refining the overall organizational pattern of your speech. As you write the preparation outline, you may find it necessary to rearrange your points or to add or subtract supporting material. You may also realize that some of your main points are sufficiently supported while others are lacking. The final draft of your preparation outline should include full sentences, making up a complete script of your entire speech. In most cases, however, the preparation outline is reserved for planning purposes only and is translated into a speaking outline before you deliver the speech.
OUTLINE FORMATTING GUIDE
Title: Organizing Your Public Speech
Topic: Organizing public speeches
Specific Purpose Statement: To inform listeners about the various ways in which they can organize their public speeches.
Thesis Statement: A variety of organizational styles can be used to organize public speeches.
Introduction
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- Attention Getter
- Topic/ Audience relevance
- Establish Your Credibility
- Central Idea/Thesis statement
- Preview Main Points
(Transition)
Body
I. Main point #1
A. First sub-point
1. Support
2. Support
B. Second sub-point
1. Support
2. Support
(Transition)
I. Main point #2
A. First sub-point
1. Support
2. Support
3. Support
B. Second sub-point
1. Support
2. Support
3. Support
(Transition)
Conclusion
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- Summary
- Provide closure
- Clincher
Of course, your actual outline may look different based on your content. You may have three main points or different levels of sub-points. You will also use full, declarative sentences in your outline. Your preparation outline should indicate what you want to say in your speech (although you may say it differently). Use this guide to help format your content for your preparation outline.
Include the title, topic, specific purpose statement, and thesis statement at the top of the outline. These elements are helpful to you, the speechwriter, since they remind you what you are trying to accomplish in your speech. They are also helpful to anyone reading and assessing your outline since knowing what you want to accomplish will determine how they perceive the elements included in your outline. Additionally, write out the transitional statements you will use to alert audiences that you are moving from one point to another. These are included in parentheses between the main points.
On a separate page, you should include a reference page for any outside resources you mention during the speech. These should be cited using whatever citations style your professor requires.
Speaking Outline
A speaking outline is an outline you will prepare for use when delivering the speech. The speaking outline is much more succinct than the preparation outline and includes brief phrases or words that remind the speakers of the points they need to make, plus supporting material and signposts.[2] The words or phrases used on the speaking outline should briefly encapsulate all of the information needed to prompt the speaker to accurately deliver the speech. Although some cases call for reading a speech verbatim from the full-sentence outline, in most cases speakers will simply refer to their speaking outline for quick reminders and to ensure that they do not omit any important information. Because it uses just words or short phrases, and not full sentences, the speaking outline can easily be transferred to index cards that can be referenced during a speech.
Using the Speaking Outline
Using a speaking outline will help you to deliver an effective speech. Under no circumstances should you ever attempt to use your preparation outline or a word for word written out speech during your speech delivery. You will end up reading a sequence of words to your audience instead of delivering your message extemporaneously.
Whether you decide to use index cards or the printed outline, here are a few tips. First, write large enough so that you do not have to bring the cards or pages close to your eyes to read them. Second, make sure you have the cards/pages in the correct order and bound together in some way so that they do not get out of order. Third, just in case the cards/pages do get out of order (this happens too often!), be sure that you number each in the top right corner so you can quickly and easily get things organized. Fourth, try not to fiddle with the cards/pages when you are speaking. It is best to lay them down if you have a podium or table in front of you. If not, practice reading from them in front of a mirror. You should be able to look down quickly, read the text, and then return to your gaze to the audience.
Key Takeaways
- Outlining our speech helps us to organize our speech content so that we can communicate it effectively to the audience.
- You will create two outlines for successful speech delivery.
- The preparation outline is intended to help you prepare your delivery.
- The speaking note outline is intended to help you deliver your speech extemporaneously.
References
- Lucas, Stephen E. (2004). The art of public speaking (8th edition). New York: McGraw-Hill. ↵
- Beebe, S. A. & Beebe, S. J. (2003). The public speaking handbook (5th edition). Boston: Pearson. ↵
- Chapter 8 Outlining Your Speech. Authored by: Joshua Trey Barnett. Provided by: University of Indiana, Bloomington, IN. Located at: http://publicspeakingproject.org/psvirtualtext.html. Project: The Public Speaking Project. License: CC BY-NC-ND: Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives
- Alpena Mayor Carol Shafto Speaks at 2011 Michigan Municipal League Convention. Authored by: Michigan Municipal League. Located at: https://flic.kr/p/aunJMR. License: CC BY-ND: Attribution-NoDerivatives
- TAG speaks of others first. Authored by: Texas Military Forces. Located at: https://www.flickr.com/photos/texasmilitaryforces/5560449970/. License: CC BY-ND: Attribution-NoDerivatives